Happy Summer everyone!
To celebrate the summer months, I’m posting a “Summer
Romance Series” of blogs. Today I’m sharing a few thoughts on how authors use
details to spice up sultry summer romances.
Close your eyes and imagine yourself at the beach. The ocean
waves are rolling into shore… you feel the sun on your skin and the warm,
gritty sand beneath your toes… the air smells like salt water mixed with
coconut-scented suntan lotion… You open your eyes and see a tanned hunk
standing in front of you. A bead of sweat drips down his six-pack abs…
Did it feel like you were on the beach? Could you sense
everything happening around you? Good, because conveying sensory details to
readers is an excellent way to draw them into the book and make them part of
the action.
More than anything, readers want to get inside the story,
feel what the characters are feeling, and live vicariously in the world the
author has created. When writing a summer romance (or any romance), authors
should make the most of the five senses to bring the story alive. Exploring all
the details of a scene gives the reader the experience of “being there.”
Here are a few examples of how authors bring everyday
surroundings to life and enhance the sensory details in a story:
What’s the weather? How does the weather influence the action in a story? Is it too hot and humid to move? Does a sudden thunderstorm send everyone at the baseball game running for cover? Or is it a perfect breezy summer day? When does the scene take place? At an early morning sunrise? In the blazing afternoon heat? A cool summer night?
Liven it up with color! Summer colors are usually bold and bright. Authors can use details to describe the heroine’s hot pink bathing suit, the hero’s cherry red convertible, or the vibrant turquoise beach towel they make love on…
Add some flavor: The sense of taste is usually hard to work
into a romance, but authors can get inventive. When the characters kiss, what
do they taste? Zingy lemonade? Beer? Mint chip ice cream? Spicy BBQ? Does the
heroine taste like the strawberries she’s just eaten?
The sounds of summer: Summer is a great time of year for main characters to be outside, so what do they hear in the background? Kids yelling and playing games? Music? Splashing in a pool? Carnival-ride sounds from a boardwalk? Sea gulls calling? Lawn mowers blaring?
Look around: What do the characters see as they go through a scene? Fireflies? Bees buzzing around flowers? A tattoo peeking out from under a bathing suit? Her long tan legs? Are people watching them kiss on the beach?
Breathe deep: The sense of smell isn’t always crucial to a romance, but having a hero follow his nose to the scent of burgers cooking on a grill, or relaxing in the comforting smell of smoke from a campfire can enhance a scene. Maybe the heroine is turned on (or off!) when she smells suntan lotion. Don’t forget to stop and smell the flowers. Flowers are blooming all summer, and the heroine can be an avid gardener who loves the scent of roses, while the hero has allergies.
Reach out and touch: One way to pull readers into the action
is to describe what the characters physically feel as they go through a scene.
Authors can describe sweat trickling down the hero’s back, the brisk coolness
of walking into an air-conditioned room, jumping into a cold lake, rough sand
under bare feet, or even what it feels like to touch the hero’s hot, sweaty
skin…
My summer paranormal romance, Confessions of a Vampire’s
Lover, is set at the beach. (Yes, it’s quite an unusual setting for a vampire
romance!) In this book, I used a variety of details to describe the hero’s
obsession with the sun, sand, and surf (or as he put it: wax, water, and
waves).
I contrasted all that with details of his nights spent with
the vampire heroine (the moonlight reflecting off the ocean, making love on the
deserted beach, and swimming at night). By enhancing the details, I showed how
Brian and Anya lived in completely different worlds (literally, night and day)
and still found summer love.
I incorporated a lot of “summer” details into my contemporary
romance, Trust with Hearts. In this sizzling tale, Curtis and Sherrie fall in
love over the course of a summer. I used the hot and sticky weather, cool
summer drinks, and sultry summer nights to build heat between the two
characters.
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The next time you read a summer romance, pay closer
attention to the little details the author has added. Notice how they draw you
deeper into the world of the characters and the story. And don’t we all want to
get swept away into another world for a while?
I hope you enjoyed this “Summer Romance Series” blog. Visit
my site www.kelliwilkins.com to learn about all of my books, read more blogs,
and get links to my social media.
Whether you’re writing a summer romance, or losing yourself
in one on a lazy afternoon, enjoy the summer!
Kelli A. Wilkins
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Kelli A. Wilkins is an award-winning author who has
published more than 100 short stories, 24 romance novels, and 9
mystery/thriller/horror ebooks. Her romances span many genres and settings, and
she likes to scare readers with her horror, mystery, and thriller fiction.
Her latest book, The Route 9 Stalker, was published in
January 2026. This mystery/thriller is set in Central NJ and follows Detective
Jim Rourke on a disturbing new case. Meet him for the first time in The Route 9
Killer.
Kelli's 24th romance, For Love’s Sake, an epic historical/fantasy romantic adventure, was published in January 2025.
In 2024, she released Surreal Escapes, a collection of 7 speculative/spooky stories. Anything can—and does—happen in this anthology.
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